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SVN-Revision: 6462
Tim Yardley il y a 19 ans
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docs/build.tex

@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ This article refers to the "Kamikaze" branch of OpenWrt, which can be downloaded
 subversion using the following command:
 subversion using the following command:
 
 
 \begin{Verbatim}
 \begin{Verbatim}
-$ svn co https://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/trunk kamikaze
+$ svn checkout https://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/trunk kamikaze
 \end{Verbatim}
 \end{Verbatim}
 
 
-Additionally, ther is a trac interface on \href{https://dev.openwrt.org/}{https://dev.openwrt.org/}
-which can be used to monitor svn commits and browse the sources.
+Additionally, there is a trac interface on \href{https://dev.openwrt.org/}{https://dev.openwrt.org/}
+which can be used to monitor svn commits and browse the source repository.
 
 
 
 
 \subsubsection{The directory structure}
 \subsubsection{The directory structure}
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ features or removed to save space. Note that packages are also maintained outsid
 trunk and can be obtained from subversion at the following location:
 trunk and can be obtained from subversion at the following location:
 
 
 \begin{Verbatim}
 \begin{Verbatim}
-$ svn co https://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/packages ../packages
+$ svn checkout https://svn.openwrt.org/openwrt/packages packages
 \end{Verbatim}
 \end{Verbatim}
 
 
 Those packages can be used to extend the functionality of the build system and need to be
 Those packages can be used to extend the functionality of the build system and need to be
@@ -102,11 +102,10 @@ To include all packages, issue the following command:
 $ ln -s packages/*/* kamikaze/package/
 $ ln -s packages/*/* kamikaze/package/
 \end{Verbatim}
 \end{Verbatim}
 
 
-
 \texttt{target} refers to the embedded platform, this contains items which are specific to
 \texttt{target} refers to the embedded platform, this contains items which are specific to
 a specific embedded platform. Of particular interest here is the "\texttt{target/linux}"
 a specific embedded platform. Of particular interest here is the "\texttt{target/linux}"
-directory which is broken down by platform and contains the kernel config and patches
-to the kernel for a particular platform. There's also the "\texttt{target/image}" directory
+directory which is broken down by platform \textit{<arch>} and contains the patches to the
+kernel, profile config, for a particular platform. There's also the "\texttt{target/image}" directory
 which describes how to package a firmware for a specific platform.
 which describes how to package a firmware for a specific platform.
 
 
 Both the target and package steps will use the directory "\texttt{build\_\textit{<arch>}}"
 Both the target and package steps will use the directory "\texttt{build\_\textit{<arch>}}"
@@ -186,7 +185,7 @@ in OpenWrt you'll find two things:
 \begin{itemize}
 \begin{itemize}
     \item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/Makefile}
     \item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/Makefile}
     \item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/patches}
     \item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/patches}
-	\item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/files}
+    \item \texttt{package/\textit{<name>}/files}
 \end{itemize}
 \end{itemize}
 
 
 The patches directory is optional and typically contains bug fixes or optimizations to
 The patches directory is optional and typically contains bug fixes or optimizations to